A selection of quality (and not-so- quality) works from quality (and not-so-quality) people. You decide which is which. An experiment of sorts in my mind and others, this is what you the faithful readers and writers make it. Have fun with it! Write poetry without judgment.
Sunday, March 7, 2010
A Scene from Downtown Phoenix on First Friday (in Seventeen Syllables)
Interesting evening...though your first line has six syllables...you know that, right? Not that it matters or anything....
ReplyDeleteI changed it. Curse you and Merriam-Webster!
ReplyDeleteYou didn't have to change a thing. We love you and your poem just as they are. *cheers*
ReplyDeleteNo, no, it's better this way. Can't wait for the rest of the haikus, I'm sure they'll school mine something fierce!
ReplyDeleteP.S. We should make it a rule that the title has to have more syllables in it than the actual haiku itself.
ReplyDeletei love this one. i keep coming back to it and wishing my haikus were like this, but i dont know why exactly...
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